Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Okay, your proposal looks good to me, many thanks.

Regards!
-Qin Wu
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[e-mail]>
To: "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]>
Cc: "Zhen Cao" <[e-mail]>; "Hui Deng" <[e-mail]>; "Stephen Farrell" <[e-mail]>; "General Area Review Team" <[e-mail]>
Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:57 PM
Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07


> Hi Qin Wu:
> 
> As far as I remember, there is a policy in force that does not allow URLs 
> in RFCs, in particular in the IANA section. I believe that the motivation 
> is that URLs can change with time.
> 
> The proposal is (something around these lines):
> 
>     Further, this document instructs IANA to add a new lable in the User 
> Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels of the Extended Master Session Key 
> (EMSK) Parameters registry, as follows:
> 
>         EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
> 
> /Miguel
> 
> 
> On 03/02/2012 8:43, Qin Wu wrote:
>> Hi, Miguel:
>> I think you are looking for this registry.
>> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
>> To make clear, the proposed change is replace the OLD Text
>> "
>> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>>     from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:
>>
>>        EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
>> "
>> With the NEW Text:
>> "
>> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>>     from the "User Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels" name space maintained at
>> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
>>   with a value:
>>
>>        EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
>> "
>> Hope this addresses your comment.
>>
>> Regards!
>> -Qin Wu
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Miguel A. Garcia"<[e-mail]>
>> To: "Zhen Cao"<[e-mail]>
>> Cc: "Hui Deng"<[e-mail]>;<[e-mail]>; "Stephen Farrell"<[e-mail]>; "General Area Review Team"<[e-mail]>
>> Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:18 PM
>> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07
>>
>>
>>> Zhen,
>>>
>>> The issue with IANA is double:
>>>
>>> On one side, you need to clearly indicate to IANA which registry they
>>> need to change.
>>>
>>> On another side, someone reading this RFC should be able to go to
>>> www.iana.org and find the registry.
>>>
>>> The solve both issues you don't need a reference to RFC 5295. What you
>>> need to say "Extended Master Session Key (EMSK) Parameters registry" in
>>> the IANA considerations section, because this is the official name by
>>> which the registry is known.
>>>
>>> BR,
>>>
>>>           Miguel
>>>
>>> On 03/02/2012 8:11, Zhen Cao wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>   - Another topic, Section 9 (IANA Considerations) reads:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>      Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>>>>>>      from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>         EAP Early-Authentication [e-mail]
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>   I am missing the sentence to name the master registry where the USRK Key
>>>>>>   Labels subregistry is stored. This is the Extended Master Session Key (EMSK)
>>>>>>   Parameters registry (I guess). And probably this comment is also valid for
>>>>>>   the rest of the IANA actions: the main registry is not named, and it is hard
>>>>>>   to find it.
>>>> [CZ]: EMSK or DSRK lable is defined in the section 8.1 "Key Lables" of
>>>> RFC5295. We will add reference to RFC5295 to fix this. Thanks.
>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>
>>> --
>>> Miguel A. Garcia
>>> [phone]
>>> Ericsson Spain
> 
> -- 
> Miguel A. Garcia
> [phone]
> Ericsson Spain
>