Re: [Gen-art] [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Thu, 11 April 2019 12:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
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Joel:

Thank you for your timely review.   

Sue 

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Subject: [Idr] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-04-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: 
    Section 3 begins "his section".  I expect that should be "This section".


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