From: Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11
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Hi Alissa,

Thanks for your ballot.  I will incorporate the due updates as part of the =
IESG update in version 12.=20

Thanks.
Young

-----Original Message-----
From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:alissa@cooperw.in]=20
Sent: Tuesday, February 5, 2019 1:24 PM
To: Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com>; Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ex=
t-11

Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Young, thank you for your responses. I ente=
red a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jan 29, 2019, at 8:02 PM, Leeyoung <leeyoung@huawei.com> wrote:
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> Hi Elwyn,
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> Thanks for further review and confirming the acceptance of the most of th=
e edits while pointing out a few items to be corrected. I will update those=
 during the IESG review.=20
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> Best regards,
> Young
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com]=20
> Sent: Monday, January 28, 2019 2:13 PM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext.all@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Revie=
w Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for=
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D before posting a new version of the draft.
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2019-01-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07
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> Summary:
> Ready.  There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks v=
ery much for addressing my last call comments.
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> Major issues:
> None.
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> Minor issues:
> None.
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one para=
graph earlier than the added expansion in v11.
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> S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC.
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> S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/
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