Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 29 August 2016 20:00 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08
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Ruediger, Thanks and regards, Brian On 29/08/2016 19:19, Ruediger.Geib@telekom.de wrote: > Hi Brian, > > thanks. I've submitted a new version without the nits (I applied "RFC nnnn" notation for non-reference mentions). > > Regards, > > Ruediger > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon/ > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-09 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-09 > > > -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- > Von: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com] > Gesendet: Montag, 29. August 2016 06:47 > An: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon.all@ietf.org; General Area Review Team > Betreff: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2016-08-29 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-08 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: Ready with nits > -------- > > Comments: > --------- > > 1. I was co-chair of the original diffserv WG, and I have tracked this draft throughout its life and influenced some of its content. I have re-read it carefully for this review. > > 2. I believe it is correctly positioned as Informational. It might become a candidate for BCP with deployment experience. > > Nits: > ----- > > Section 4 mentions RFC2575, certainly a typo for RFC2475. > > Non-reference mentions of RFCs are inconsistent, e.g. both "RFC4594" and "RFC 4594" occur. >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Ruediger.Geib
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Brian E Carpenter