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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-ip-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 02 October 2019 20:23 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 02 Oct 2019 16:23:02 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-ip-06
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Robert, thanks for your review.

> On Jun 3, 2019, at 11:58 AM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-acme-ip-06
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2019-06-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-12
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard rfc.
> 
> One minor nit: The security considerations section reads oddly. I'm not sure
> what it means for an extension to deviate from a threat model. I think you want
> to say "does not add to" rather than "does not deviate”?

This seems like a useful edit to me.

I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

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