Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-16

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Good Morning,



Thank you for your comments Stewart, please see my responses below. A new version of the draft will be published shortly and will address all of the review comments that needed edits.





Thanks

Roger



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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-16



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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant

Review result: Ready with Issues



I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.



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Document: draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-16

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant

Review Date: 2019-06-27

IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-08

IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat



Summary:



A well written document that is ready for publication subject to a couple of clarifications



Major issues: None



Minor issues:



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2.  Migrating to Newer Versions of This Extension



   (Note to RFC Editor: remove this section before publication as an

   RFC.)



SB> This seems like good advice, why is it to be removed?



[RDC] Agree, Note has been removed

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7.  Security Considerations



   The mapping extensions described in this document do not provide any

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SB> "security services" or "security risks"



[RDC] “security services”

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