Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 17 May 2021 08:49 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09
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Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-5-4, at 20:39, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-babel-yang-model-09 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2021-05-04 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-22 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: A well written text that is ready for publication. Just one note and a > couple of minor nits. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > 5. Acknowledgements > Juliusz Chroboczek provided most of the example configurations for babel that > are shown in the Appendix. > > The Appendix seems seems quite substantive, I am surprised that Juliusz was not > listed as an author. > > Nits/editorial comments: > 2.1. Information Model > > " attributes are marked a read-only objects in the information module" > SB> s/marked a/marked as/ > > 2.3. YANG Module > "On other hand, for a" > > SB> s/On other hand/On the other hand/ > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Mahesh Jethanandani
- Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert