Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Wed, 06 February 2019 13:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08
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On 06.02.2019 08:21, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> Hi Erik!
> 
>> On 6 Feb 2019, at 6:10 pm, Erik Kline <ek@google.com>; wrote:
>>
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>
>> [1] I assume the URIs in 6.3 are also meant to be deleted upon publication?
> 
> Not all of them; just the ones referenced from the section that's marked for deletion.
> ...

Well, there's only one left them. The referencing text is:

>    Some applications on the Web require the discovery of information
>    about an origin [RFC6454] (sometimes called "site-wide metadata")
>    before making a request.  For example, the Robots Exclusion Protocol
>    (http://www.robotstxt.org/ [5]) specifies a way for automated
>    processes to obtain permission to access resources; likewise, the
>    Platform for Privacy Preferences [P3P] tells user-agents how to
>    discover privacy policy before interacting with an origin server.

Removing the "[5]" and dropping Section 6.3 completely seems to be best, 
but in doubt this can be left to the RFC Editor.

Best regards, Julian