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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 28 August 2019 06:55 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 28 Aug 2019 12:24:38 +0530
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To: Erik Kline <ek@google.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10
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Hi Erik,

Thank you for your review and suggestions. We will update in the next revision.

Thanks!
Dhruv

On Wed, Aug 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker
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> Reviewer: Erik Kline
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10
> Reviewer: Erik Kline
> Review Date: 2019-08-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
>
> Gentle reminder for the authors to double-check all the lower case "should"s,
> "required"s, and "must not"s (etc) to make sure it's not important that they be
> capitalized (since the case-sensitive requirements text is referenced).
>
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> There are some periodic grammatical changes that I think would be nice, but I
> assume that can get sorted out with the RFC editor.
>
> Two random things I'll note:
>
> Section 1> I can't find "Path Control Element" in RFC 5440. Should this be
> "Path Computation Element"?
>
> Section 5.2>
>     .  s/speaker wish to disable/speaker wishes to disable/
>     .  s/of same type/of the same type/
>

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