[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08
Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com> Thu, 06 April 2017 05:52 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08
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Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-?? Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2017-04-05 IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-06 IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Looks fine from a non-security-expert's perspective. It is my duty to ask about keyid in section 2.1: A "keyid" parameter SHOULD be a UTF-8 [RFC3629] encoded string, particularly where the identifier might need to appear in a textual form. I presume that simply means "might need to be rendered" and does not include "might need to be typed in by someone", correct? The former is easy; the latter probably requires a bit more text.
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper
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- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-h… Pete Resnick