Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Hi, Miguel:
I think you are looking for this registry.
http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
To make clear, the proposed change is replace the OLD Text 
"
Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
   from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:

      EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
"
With the NEW Text:
"
Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
   from the "User Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels" name space maintained at
http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
 with a value:

      EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
"
Hope this addresses your comment.

Regards!
-Qin Wu
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[e-mail]>
To: "Zhen Cao" <[e-mail]>
Cc: "Hui Deng" <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>; "Stephen Farrell" <[e-mail]>; "General Area Review Team" <[e-mail]>
Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:18 PM
Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07


> Zhen,
> 
> The issue with IANA is double:
> 
> On one side, you need to clearly indicate to IANA which registry they 
> need to change.
> 
> On another side, someone reading this RFC should be able to go to 
> www.iana.org and find the registry.
> 
> The solve both issues you don't need a reference to RFC 5295. What you 
> need to say "Extended Master Session Key (EMSK) Parameters registry" in 
> the IANA considerations section, because this is the official name by 
> which the registry is known.
> 
> BR,
> 
>          Miguel
> 
> On 03/02/2012 8:11, Zhen Cao wrote:
>>> >
>>> >  - Another topic, Section 9 (IANA Considerations) reads:
>>> >
>>> >     Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>>> >     from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:
>>> >
>>> >        EAP Early-Authentication [e-mail]
>>> >
>>> >
>>> >  I am missing the sentence to name the master registry where the USRK Key
>>> >  Labels subregistry is stored. This is the Extended Master Session Key (EMSK)
>>> >  Parameters registry (I guess). And probably this comment is also valid for
>>> >  the rest of the IANA actions: the main registry is not named, and it is hard
>>> >  to find it.
>> [CZ]: EMSK or DSRK lable is defined in the section 8.1 "Key Lables" of
>> RFC5295. We will add reference to RFC5295 to fix this. Thanks.
>>
>>> >
> 
> -- 
> Miguel A. Garcia
> [phone]
> Ericsson Spain