Re: [Gen-art] GenART LC review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06

Enke Chen <enkechen@cisco.com> Wed, 20 June 2012 22:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] GenART LC review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06
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Hi, Christer:

Thanks for your review.  The review comments are accepted and will be 
addressed in the respin.

Please note, though, the terminology changes will result in a larger 
diff between the versions.

-- Enke

On 6/12/12 8:38 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
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> Document:                             draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06.txt
> Reviewer:                               Christer Holmberg
> Review Date:                          2012-06-12
> IETF LC End Date:                   2012-06-15
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
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> Summary:  The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial nits.
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> Major issues: -
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> Minor issues: -
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> GENERAL:
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> Q_GEN-1: Sometimes the text says "AS number", and sometimes "Autonomous System number". Please use consistant terminology.
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> Q_GEN-2: Sometimes the text says "2-octet", and sometimes "two-octet". Please use consistant terminology.
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> Q_GEN-3: Sometimes the text says "4-octet", and sometimes "four-octet". Please use consistant terminology.
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> SECTION 4.2.1:
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> Q_4_2_1-1: I suggest to replace "OLD one" with "OLD BGP speaker".
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> Regards,
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> Christer
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