Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avtext-avpf-ccm-layered-03

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 05 January 2017 11:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avtext-avpf-ccm-layered-03
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Thanks for the review Vijay, and everyone for the discussion.

I think I’m fine with the section headings as they are; it is clear at least to me what is meant. The choice between a sentence at the beginning of the section or in the section title should be up to you, as long as the end result is clear.

Jari