[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-meeting-policy-04

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 15 April 2018 07:43 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mtgvenue-meeting-policy-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-04-15
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-19
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as BCP with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. I was wondering what is the process for selecting exploratory meeting site
comparing to sites according to the regular 1-1-1 policy (who make the
proposal, where is it discussed).  The
draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process does not mention the
exploratory meeting site.

2. In section 2 "BACKGROUND NOTE:The" missing space.