Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 23 August 2022 15:15 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2022-7-22, at 2:23, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2022-07-21
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-04
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: This document is ready for publicaiton as a Proposed standards
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues:
>     I think that in augment "/nsfikels:ipsec-ikeless/nsfikels:sad/"
>        + "nsfikels:sad-entry"
>     the container ipsec-stats {
>     should have, after if-feature "ipsec-stats";,
>   config false;?
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: N/A
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