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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 12 July 2022 21:07 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Peter, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot (on behalf of IANA) for this document.

Lars


> On 2022-7-8, at 21:23, Peter Yee via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: 2022-07-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-07-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2022-07-14
> 
> Summary: This document specifies how SVCB can be used for named DNS servers,
> including ones that use any of DoH, DoT, and DoQ. There are nits that should be
> fixed prior to publication. I really have no complaints about this document and
> am not repeating any points that have been made in prior reviews. [Ready with
> Nits]
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> General:
> 
> Perhaps change the two occurrences of "a SVCB" to "an SVCB" on the assumption
> that "SVCB" is read as ess-vee-cee-bee.
> 
> Specific:
> 
> Page 5, 1st bullet item, insert "to" between "trusts" and "not". Or place the
> "to" after "not".
> 
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