[Gen-art] [Gem-art] Gem-ART review of draft-moriaty-pkcs1-03
Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com> Thu, 15 September 2016 16:58 UTC
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From: Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-moriaty-pkcs1-03 Reviewer: Lucy Yong Review Date: 15 September 2016 IETF LC End Date: 2 September 2016 Summary: The document is well written, and is ready for publication as Informational RFC. IPR considerations are in Appendix D. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: * Several places use xxx-PKCS-v1_5, should it be xxx-PKCS1-v1_5? where xxx may be EMSA, RSAES, and RSASSA. Editorial Issues: * Please check the Idnits tool * Page 18: s/k - 2hLen -2/k - 2hLen - 2/ * Page 18: s/"knowing"the/"knowing" the/ * Page 40: s/ -- such as the salt value in EMSA-PSS --/ such as the salt value in EMSA-PSS/ * replace Section 7.2.2. title with "Decryption operation" * In Section 8.2, s/Note:/Note./ (to be consistent with the rest of doc.) * Section 8.2 last paragraph, replace "recommended" with "RECOMMENDED" Regards, Lucy
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