Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 15 September 2020 21:26 UTC

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Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2020 17:26:33 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09
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Meral, thanks for the review.  The document does say in the first sentence
of the Introduction that the preview is for the end user.  I agree that it
would be useful to emphasize that, though, and I think the right place to
do it is by adding to the first paragraph of Section 3.2 something like the
following: “The preview string is meant to help the end-user, and is not
intended to be interpreted in any way by the client software.”

Barry

On Tue, Sep 15, 2020 at 4:52 PM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2020-09-15
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> IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14
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> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I
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> Nits/editorial comments: In Section 4.2, it would have been good to give
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> example and advice on when the client uses the preview to take some
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> this to be avoided? (Was not very clear to me).
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral Shirazipour
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