[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 06 April 2019 09:26 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-04-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Apart from one figure that was difficult to understand and some trivial nits
this is well written and is ready for publication.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

         __________       __________       __________
        |          |     |          |     |          |
   ---->|   2.05   |---->|  2.05 /  |---->|  4.xx /  |
        | Pending  |     |   2.03   |     |   5.xx   |
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           ^   \ \          ^    \           ^
            \__/  \          \___/          /
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                   Figure 2: Sequence of Notifications:
SB> Not my specialty, but I don't see what message gets sent
SB> to who in the above and RFC7641 has no similar diagram.

Nits/editorial comments:
   accompanying it.  In such a case, the sequence in which these occur
   may not be relevant to the application.  This specification allows to
SB> typo - word missing
  indicate that an optional part is not present by substituting a null
   value for the representation of the part.

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   The collection is encoded as a CBOR [RFC7049] array with an even
SB> CBOR needs expanding on first use (it is not on the well known list)
   number of elements.

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   Person & email address to contact for further information:
      iesg&ietf.org
SB> Shouldn't that be iesg@ietf.org?

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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-c… Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Carsten Bormann