[Gen-art] Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 15 February 2017 13:06 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-03

Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-??
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2017-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: Ready with Issues

Major issues: None

Minor issues: As I explained in my review of the 02 version this
document introduction should warn that the RFC 7940 must be read
before...

Nits/editorial comments:

[Gen-art] Review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-r… Francis Dupont