Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-iesg-nomcom-eligibility-2020-01

Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> Thu, 30 April 2020 14:59 UTC

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From: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
Date: Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:58:54 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-iesg-nomcom-eligibility-2020-01
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Hi Barry,

Thank you for the fast response and addressing the comments.

Have a nice day,

Ines.

On Thu, Apr 30, 2020 at 5:13 PM Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> wrote:

> Thanks for your review, Ines.  Reasonable comments, and we'll consider
> them as we go into IESG Evaluation.  (On comment 3, I'm just going to
> make the necessary change myself, and remove the CREF, so it's moot.)
>
> Barry
>
> On Thu, Apr 30, 2020 at 8:35 AM Ines Robles via Datatracker
> <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> >
> > Reviewer: Ines Robles
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> > like any other last call comments.
> >
> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >
> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> > Document: draft-iesg-nomcom-eligibility-2020-01
> > Reviewer: Ines Robles
> > Review Date: 2020-04-30
> > IETF LC End Date: 2020-04-30
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary:
> >
> > This document provides a one-time interpretation of the eligibility
> rules (BCP
> > 10) that is required for the exceptional situation of the cancellation
> of the
> > in-person IETF 107 meeting. This document only affects the seating of the
> > 2020-2021 NomCom and any rules that relate to NomCom eligibility or
> process
> > before IETF 108, and does not set a precedent for the future.
> >
> > The document is clear and well written. Please find some comments below.
> >
> > Major issues: Not found
> > Minor issues: Not found
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> >
> > Some comments/questions:
> >
> > 1- It would be nice to add a reference here
> >
> > Section 1:
> >
> > "...resulting in its conversion to a limited-agenda virtual meeting,
> with remote
> >    participation only.":
> >
> >    e.g. [IETF 107 Virtual] =
> >
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ietf-announce/Gqc4-GIsnvccObQrrciL_Vm0HMU/
> >
> > 2- Should this clarification be added?
> >
> > " ...before IETF 108..." --> "...before IETF 108 (virtual or in-person
> > meeting)..." e.g. in the introduction or in section 3.
> >
> > 3- Related to this comment
> > [https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ietf/kHVPn0tyF5o4Rvd3aZ51JA2MDtU/
> ]
> >
> > "... In section 2, last paragraph, I suggest changing the CREF to,
> "Note: The
> > previous two sentences will be replaced before publication with, 'This
> document
> > contains the outcome of that discussion.'...."
> >
> >   Should this suggestion be applied?
> >
> >   Note that CREF2 mentions "the previous sentence", not "the previous two
> >   sentences...."
> >
> > 4- It would be nice to add a reference to eligibility-discuss mailing
> list/
> > draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand
> >
> > Section 3:
> >
> > "...as there will be time for proper community work on such an update..."
> >
> > Thus, e.g. "...community work on such an update (e.g. efforts such as
> > [Eligibility-discuss-ml] and [Eligibility-criteria])"
> >
> > [Eligibility-discuss-ml]=
> > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/eligibility-discuss/
> > [Eligibility-criteria]=
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand/
> >
> > Thank you for this document,
> >
> > Ines.
> >
> >
> >
>