Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-12

Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com> Fri, 29 May 2020 14:59 UTC

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From: Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-12
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Linda,

On 29/05/2020 16:52, Linda Dunbar wrote:
> Peter,
> You said:
> /we are not defining any new attributes./
> /We are allowing an existing link attributes to be used by other 
> applications, including, but not limited to SRTE./
> What prevent a node (or an application on the node) receiving the LSA 
> from using the attributes carried by the LSA?  

the problem with existing advertisement is that RSVP-TE will use it, 
even if it was not intended to be used by RSVP-TE.

We are providing a way to explicitly advertised apps that are allowed to 
use the advertised attributes.

> If no new attributes are 
> to be added, then why need a new ASLA sub-TLV?

to be able to use the existing attributes for new apps, other than RSVP-TE.


thanks,
Peter

> Linda
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com>
> Sent: Friday, May 29, 2020 5:51 AM
> To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>; gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: last-call@ietf.org; lsr@ietf.org; 
> draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of 
> draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-12
> Hi Linda,
> On 28/05/2020 19:02, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker wrote:
>> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
>> Review result: Not Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area 
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by 
>> the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like 
>> any other last call comments.
>> 
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>> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-??
>> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
>> Review Date: 2020-05-28
>> IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-29
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> 
>> Summary: this document introduces a new link attribute advertisement 
>> in OSPFv2 and OSPFv3 to address general link properties needed for new 
>> applications, such as Segment Routing.
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> The document has good description on the TLV structure of the 
>> Application specific Advertisements, but fails to describe what are 
>> the NEW Link attributes needed by Segment Routing. Page 7 (section 5) 
>> has a really good description on all the link properties added to OSFP 
>> (RFC4203, RFC 7308, RFC7471, RFC3630) to achieve TE. I can see Segment 
>> Routing would need each node to advertise its own SID and the SIDs of 
>> adjacent nodes. Can't they be encoded (or extended) in OSPF's NODE ID?
> we are not defining any new attributes.
> We are allowing an existing link attributes to be used by other 
> applications, including, but not limited to SRTE.
> thanks,
> Peter
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> 
>> Linda Dunbar
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>