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[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 18 November 2015 08:10 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151112
IETF LC End Date: 20151117
IESG Telechat date: 20151203

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  (very minor)
  - 3.1.1 figure 1 page 5: a= fingerprint1 -> a=fingerprint1

  - 7 page 9: comments,suggestions, -> comments, suggestions,

  - Authors' Addresses page 11: as the first two authors work at
   the same place one can expect exactly the same address (:-)

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

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