[Gen-art] GenART LC review of draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-03
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 24 November 2015 11:54 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015-11-23 IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Typo in the title of 3.8 "ARP/ND and Unknown Uncast Flood Avoidance" should be Unicast