[Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-grow-irr-routing-policy-considerations-05

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Thu, 08 January 2015 11:18 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: draft-ietf-grow-irr-routing-policy-considerations-05
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-01-08
IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-01
IESG Telechat date: 2015-01-08

Summary: Ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with nits)

Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits:

In various sections: first references to:
Netconf, SSH, TLS, FTP need informative references.
In Section 6:
Specifically, BGP soft-reconfiguration [REF?]
This reference needs fixing
and, later, Route Refresh Capability for BGP-4 [RFC2918] were developed so that ISPs, or their customers, could induce BGP to apply a new policy while leaving both the existing eBGP session active as well as (unaffected) routes active in both the Loc-RIB and, more importantly, FIB of the router.