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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
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Hello Vijay

Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym. The proposed modified sentence is;
"
In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration mechanism
that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address Detection (DAD) 
mechanism defined in IPv6 ND.
"

 It will show up with the next revision. 

Many thanks!

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Sent: jeudi 26 décembre 2019 18:41
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: last-call@ietf.org; draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd.all@ietf.org; 6lo@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
> 
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
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> IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2019-12-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-09
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
> 
> Major issues: 0.
> 
> Minor issues: 0.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 1.
> 
> 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used in
> S7.1.  The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
>

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