Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis-08

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Thu, 07 July 2016 14:36 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis-08


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Document: draft-hardy-pdf-mime-02

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 07/07/16

IETF LC End Date: 07/21/16

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: Ready.



This informational document which obsoletes RFC 3778 provides an overview of the PDF format and updates the media type registration of "application/pdf" by aligning it with RFC 6838. I am no expert in application formats, but the document seems to be well informed and clearly written. A couple of nits generate id-nits warnings (updating RFC 3778 is not mentioned in the Abstract, one unused reference) that can be easily fixed during the RFC Editor processing.



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