[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06
Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 25 March 2021 19:10 UTC
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Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-?? Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2021-03-23 IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-22 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: There are a few lines longer than 72 characters and this will fail the ID Nits check. I dug a bit deeper and found out some of these lines were in the CDDL in Appendix B. Here are the lines if that helps. % awk 'length($0)>72 { print length($0) $0}' draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06.txt 73Intended status: Standards Track D. López 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-256, MGF-1 with SHA-256, and a salt length of 32 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-384, MGF-1 with SHA-384, and a salt length of 48 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-512, MGF-1 with SHA-512, and a salt length of 64 bytes
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