[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Sat, 11 April 2015 12:55 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 11 April 2015 IETF LC End Date: 8 April 2015 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I only have a couple of minor editorial comments (see below). Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: Q1: In the Introduction, please expand "IS-IS" on first occurrence (outside the Abstract) Q2: In the Introduction, could you add some reference to "IS-IS" on the first occurrence?
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-exten… Christer Holmberg
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- Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-ART review of draft-i… Jari Arkko