[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-03

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Sun, 26 February 2012 19:41 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>gt;.

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Document: draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-03
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 26 February 2012
IETF LC End Date: 21 March 2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of mindor editorial nits.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:

- Section 1: Please expand 'MPLS-TP' and 'MPLS' when first used, and add a reference to where MPLS-TP and MPLS are defined.

- Section 1: Please expand ACH when first used.

Regards,

Christer