Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-03

Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer@nic.fr> Fri, 29 July 2016 07:35 UTC

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From: Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer@nic.fr>
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On Fri, Jul 29, 2016 at 12:29:02AM +0000,
 Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote 
 a message of 151 lines which said:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.

Thanks for the review.

> Nits/editorial comments:

No remarks here (I don't speak english, anyway). I think it can be
handled during the RFC Editor phase.

> -General: would be best to spell out some of the acronyms (SOA, TLD, RR etc.).

There is a reference to RFC 7719 (the DNS terminology RFC) which
defines TLD and one to RFC 1034 (the DNS standard) which defines SOA
and RR. Is it sufficient?