[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 05 November 2019 16:59 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20191028 IETF LC End Date: 20191105 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Requirement Language page 1: please add a reference to RFC 8174 - 3.1 page 5: overriden -> overridden - 4.1 page 10 on Ring Node TLV: please swap SO and MBZ descriptions - 4.3 page 11: announcment -> announcement - 4.5 pafe 12: ; and -> and ; ? Note that none requires a new version so address them only if you have another reason to publish a new version of the document. Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt Francis Dupont