[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-13

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 16 May 2024 23:15 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract: Should "exisiting" be "existing" ?

Section 2: should "treaceroute" be "traceroute"?

Thank you,
Linda