[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-hansen-scram-sha256
Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Thu, 02 April 2015 18:42 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-hansen-scram-sha256
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-hansen-scram-sha256 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2Apr2015 IETF LC End Date: 24Apr2015 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Ready for publication as Informational, with nits that should be considered. Nits/editorial comments: Nit: It raises flags for me when an Informational document uses "Updates" on a standards track document. I would argue that this does _not_ update 5802. IANA did the things that 5802 requested, and this document is requesting something else that happens to change those things. That makes this more of a "see also" than a "the protocol changed", and I think the Updates should be removed. I don't feel super strongly about the difference in _this particular case_, hence its classification as a Nit. But for consistency, and avoiding the issue of having an Informational update a PS, I hope you choose to remove it. Editorial comment: The URLs in the references section seem superfluous since you've already expanded them in the introduction?
- [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-hansen-scram-s… Robert Sparks
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-hansen-scr… Tony Hansen
- [Gen-art] Gen-art (second) LC review: draft-hanse… Robert Sparks
- [Gen-art] Gen-art (second) LC review: draft-hanse… Robert Sparks
- [Gen-art] Gen-Art telechat review: draft-hansen-s… Robert Sparks
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art telechat review: draft-hans… Jari Arkko