[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-registry-04

Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 05 March 2021 15:12 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-registry-04

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-registry-04
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2021-03-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:  The document is fine except that I think it would be appropriate to
give a brief explanation of the reason for the change and  to clarify what
paths  might be available to the expert if s/he decides to go outside the
SHOULD in bullet  of s.1

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
s2.1, bullet2:

Nits/editorial comments:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i… Elwyn Davies via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Adrian Farrel
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Elwyn Davies
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert