[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

[Robert Sparks via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2019-11-26
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a BCP but with nits to consider during the
approval process

Nits:

Neither the document nor the shepherds write-up acknowledge or explain the
replacement of RFC6838 with RFC3986 for a reference for specifying fragment
identifier syntax and semantics (hence dropping the reference to 6838). It
would be nice to have something captured in the record that supports/explains
this change.

Near that change, there is a typo, currently saying "fragment identiers'
syntax" (should be "identifiers'")

It might be good to capture in the "Note to Readers" that the RFC Editor should
also remove Section 6.3 (URIs) since all the references to them will be removed
with the removal of this Note.