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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 18 September 2019 19:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05
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Meral, thanks for your review. Christian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Sep 4, 2019, at 1:26 AM, Christian Huitema <huitema@huitema.net> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the feedback, Meral. I will start preparing an updated draft shortly.
> 
> -- Christian Huitema 
> 
>> On Sep 3, 2019, at 8:47 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
>> 
>> Thanks for the review, Meral!
>> 
>> Authors, I'm going to go ahead and send this over to the IESG, but it will
>> end up (most likely) on the September 19th telechat, so you have over a
>> week to get a revision up with fixes.
>> 
>> -Ben
>> 
>>> On Tue, Sep 03, 2019 at 05:56:20AM +0000, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>> 
>>> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>> 
>>> Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05
>>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>>> Review Date: 2019-09-02
>>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02
>>> IESG Telechat date: NA
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
>>> Major issues:
>>> 
>>> Minor issues:
>>> 
>>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>> Some may have already been reported…
>>> 
>>> -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated"
>>> 
>>> -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple"
>>> 
>>> -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent"
>>> 
>>> -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use
>>> 
>>> -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the"
>>> 
>>> -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server"
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Best Regards,
>>> Meral
>>> ---
>>> Meral Shirazipour
>>> Ericsson
>>> Research
>>> www.ericsson.com
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