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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 03 February 2022 10:50 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 03 Feb 2022 12:50:11 +0200
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Vijay, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2022-1-11, at 20:48, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2022-01-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.
> 
> Major issues: 0
> 
> Minor issues: 0
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 1
> 
> In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/
> (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
> [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/
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> Thanks,
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> - vijay
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