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Orit Levin <oritl@microsoft.com> Tue, 14 February 2017 00:46 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06

Reviewer: Orit Levin

Review Date: 2017-02-13

IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31

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Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication. I only suggest adding the acronym "RRDP" (in brackets) to the title of the document and replacing the expression "this delta protocol" with "RRDP" in 3.1 and 3.2.

Thanks,

Orit.

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