[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09

Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Thu, 28 June 2018 19:30 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-06-28
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-18
IESG Telechat date: 2018-07-05

Summary: clear writing of the procedure.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Are End points that not responding considered "Inactive Tails"?  Does the
HeadEnd report the "Inactive Tails"?

Linda Dunbar

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Linda Dunbar
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Greg Mirsky
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Linda Dunbar
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Greg Mirsky
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper