[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-li-lb-07.txt

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Sat, 08 October 2011 02:26 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-li-lb-07.txt
     MPLS Transport Profile lock Instruct and Loopback Functions
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 7-Oct-2011
IETF LC End Date: 18-Oct-2011
IESG Telechat date: 20-Oct-2011
Summary: This document is ready for publicaiton as a Proposed Standard

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