[Gen-art] Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-35 ietf last call Genart review

[Aijun Wang <[e-mail]>]

Hi, Roni:

Thanks for your review.
I have updated the draft and will be updated later, together with other comment.

Please see the detail replies inline below.

Aijun

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext
Title: BGP-LS Extension for Inter-AS Topology Retrieval
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-??9
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2026-07-01
IETF LC End Date: 2026-07-07
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with minor nits
[WAJ] Thanks！


Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 5 second paragraph  seesection 11) should be see (section 11)
[WAJ] Have updated.

In section 4 second paragraph the use of the word “among” probably mean inside or internal
[WAJ] There are two "among" in this section. I replace the first 'among' with 'within', and second 'among' with 'between', to describe the IGP-internal information and IGP-between information respectively.

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