Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Wed, 06 July 2016 15:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt
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Hi,

These are all fixed in version -14 except that the last comment re
Section 7.1 to make the change "TENANT-LABEL -> TENANT-GWMAC-LABEL"
still has a tiny glitch in it. In particular, there is an extra space
just before "GWMAC" so it's "TENANT- GWMAC-LABEL". This certainly does
not seem worth a new version and can be fixed by the RFC Editor.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Wed, Jun 29, 2016 at 1:02 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:
> Francis, Donald, thank you for the review & updates.
>
> Jari
>