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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18

Samita Chakrabarti <samita.chakrabarti@ericsson.com> Wed, 28 March 2012 14:08 UTC

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Hi Richard,

Thanks for the recommendation on editorial changes for definition of term of 'transitive link'. 
The 6lowpan-nd document refers to "non-transitive" link in the abstract and that is the only occurrence.

It is indirectly defined in RFC 4861 section 2.2 under "asymetric reachability" definition.
Proposed solution: 
1. Add "non-transitive link" in the Terminology section and refer to section 2.2 of RFC 4861.

-Samita
 

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From: Richard L.Barnes [mailto:rbarnes@bbn.com] 
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Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18
Reviewer: Richard Barnes
Review Date: 30 December 2011
IETF LC End Date: -
IESG Telechat date: (if known) 5 January 2012

Summary:
Ready, with one editorial nit.

The phrase "transitive link" is unfamiliar to me.  A definition would be helpful.

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