Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 14 October 2019 17:41 UTC

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Russ, thanks for your reviews of this document. James, thanks for incorporating updates based on Russ’s prior review. I don’t have strong feelings about either of Russ’s points below but it would be good to get a response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Oct 11, 2019, at 1:40 PM, Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2019-10-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-10
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17
> 
> 
> Thank you for addressing my comments on the previous version of this
> Internet-Draft.
> 
> 
> Summary: Ready with Nits
> 
> Major Concerns:
> 
> None.
> 
> 
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> None.
> 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> My guess is that the second paragraph in Section 7.1 uses "should"
> because it is asking implementors to think about these things when
> selecting a clock rate.  I expected this section to be talking about
> the payload format parameters, not implementation considerations.  I
> am not sure, but this paragraph might be more impactful elsewhere.  
> 
> In section 4.2.1.1 and 4.2.1.2.1.2, should the blocks of XML be
> enclosed between '<CODE BEGINS>' and '<CODE ENDS>' lines to make it
> very clear that the Simplified BSD License applies here?
> 
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