Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

ianfarrer@gmx.com Mon, 07 January 2019 12:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06
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Hi Roni,

My apologies for the oversight. I’ve just posted -14 which includes the RESTCONF reference in the Introduction.

Thanks,
Ian

> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>; wrote:
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-10-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
> management. why not add restconf to introduction?
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