Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 21 February 2019 14:18 UTC

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Robert, thanks for your review. I agree about the heartbeat requirements and said so in my No Objection ballot. Tiru, thanks for your response on the other point.

Alissa

> On Feb 14, 2019, at 1:08 AM, Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>; wrote:
> 
> Hi Robert,
> 
> Please see inline
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>> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
>> Review result: Ready with Issues
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>> Document: draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18
>> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
>> Review Date: 2019-02-13
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-23
>> IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21
>> 
>> Summary: Ready, but with a process issue for the shepherd and AD to consider.
>> 
>> This version addressed all of my comments on version -16. Thank you.
>> 
>> However, the diff shows that a large number of SHOULDs were changed to
>> MUSTs.
>> I'm guessing that was in response to a comment in the TSVART review of -16.
> 
> Yup.
> 
>> This large scale substitution makes me worry - are they really the right
>> adjustments? Has the group reviewed and agreed to these normative changes?
> 
> The WG has not identified any qualifying exceptional conditions for these requirements when the discussing the DOTS protocol and requirements drafts, hence I updated 
> these requirements to use MUST.
> 
>> 
>> As a nit, I'll note that the additional description of heartbeating creeps into
>> specifying protocol rather than requirements.
> 
> The additional text in SIG-004 is added to justify the reason for using "SHOULD".
> 
> Cheers,
> -Tiru 
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