[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-te-app-13

Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 29 May 2020 13:10 UTC

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2020-05-29
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Not really my area of expertise, however, I did not spot any issues during the
review. The document is ready for publication.

Major issues:

None.

Minor issues:

None.

Nits/editorial comments:

* There are spacing issues mostly with parenthesis in the text that the RFC
editor likely takes care of. * On line 165 SR is used without expanding it. The
expansion is obvious but the RFC has both "Segment Routing" and "Shared Risk"
used with SRxx.. * At least Section 5 has "is NOT" and "does NOT" emphasis
used. I would use just "is not" and "does not", since those with "NOT" are not
in listed in normal "Requirements Language".