[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Mon, 12 February 2018 18:43 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-?
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-14

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: None


Nits/editorial comments:

      Typo: Abstract 3rd paragraph: "RTP header extension that van..."
      Do you mean "RTP header extension that can..."?

Linda Dunbar