[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12

Dale Worley <worley@ariadne.com> Mon, 23 July 2018 02:04 UTC

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From: Dale Worley <worley@ariadne.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12

Reviewer: Dale Worley
Review result: Ready

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Document:  draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12
Reviewer:  Dale R. Worley
Review Date:  2018-07-22
IETF LC End Date:  2018-06-26
IESG Telechat date:  2018-08-02

Summary:

   This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Nit:

   3.1.  On-the-Wire Representation

   Vector values MUST be communicated along with of a trustmark URL
   (Section 5) to give the components and component values context.

s/with of/with/

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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-richer-… Dale Worley
Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ric… Alissa Cooper